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Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Bite Me v.7 Chapter 17 Part 2 of 3




            Sitting on the throne is Whitney, the current Queen of Atlantis. Willard, the chief guard, approaches her and bows.

            “My queen,” said Willard, “We have two prisoners in the dungeon that require your immediate attention.

            “Oh who are they?” asked Whitney.

            “They are a couple of vampires, my queen,” said Willard, “I advise you to have them executed immediately.”

            “Vampires?” asked Whitney, “how is that even possible?”

            “Does it matter?” asked Willard, “If word gets out in the human world that two vampires made it here then there will indeed be an invasion. One we will not be able to hold back.”

            “Tell me,” said Whitney, “Who are these vampires?”

            “My queen,” said Willard, “that is not important. Please, give the order to execute them immediately.”

            “Why is it so important?” asked Whitney, “that they be executed before I even meet them.”

            “That would not be wise,” said Willard.

            “I don’t care,” said Whitney, “I want to know the names of these vampires now!”

            “But my queen,” said Willard.

            “Now Willard!” ordered Whitney, “or you will be removed from your post.”

            “Okay,” said Willard, “it is your half-sister Wendy and her mother Wanda.”

            “But I thought you said they died,” said Whitney.

            “They did,” said Willard, “They had to have died in order to become vampires.”

            “How did they become vampires?” asked Whitney.

            “They must have been affected by that accident that occurred in the Human World months ago and was cured by vampire blood and then was killed so they could become vampires,” said Willard, “The details we have is sketchy. That is all we really know and it is from research we did after that message we got from your father before we believed he died.”

            “So my sister is a vampire and yet she still managed to come home,” said Whitney, “she no doubts expects to claim her throne.”

            “My queen,” said Willard, “the last request your father made we believe was to not allow her to claim the throne. This is nothing but mere assumption but we believed they are not just vampires but one who belong to a queen.”

            “A queen, huh?” asked Whitney, “that means their loyalty is to her not Atlantis.”

            “That is the belief of the council as well,” said Willard.

            “Well then bring them here at once,” ordered Whitney, “I want to see them. To test them to see where their true loyalty lies.”

            “What if they prove they are loyal to Atlantis?” asked Willard, “Will you give up the throne to your sister?”

            “Of course not,” said Whitney, “It’s like you said, she’s dead and can no longer claim the throne. I however can still allow them to live in Atlantis providing they serve on my staff. Now go and get them and bring them to me, now!”

            “Yes, my queen,” said Willard, “at once.”

            He exits the Throne room.


Monday, October 28, 2013

Uncle Ed's Holiday Report: Topic #1: Halloween

Well I finally decided to do this. I am going to talk about the popular holiday Halloween. Now the traditions of this holiday of "dressing up in costumes", "making Jack-o-lanterns", "trick-or-treating" among others date back before Christianity came to Northern Europe (around the Great Britain area). Now I was going to do detailed research on this but I never took the time to do so. Instead I am only going to tell you what I know from memory. Most of what I will say about this topic will be common knowledge.

"Halloween" is a slang term for "Oh Hallows Eve" which is a Catholic holiday that precedes "All Saints Day". It is my understanding that the Catholic Church did this so the Celtic People could still keep their traditions and be Christians too. This happen after The Roman Emperor Constantine became a Christian and made it the official one of the empire. Now this is both a good thing and a bad thing. The good thing about it is that Christians would no longer be persecuted. The bad thing is it began a tradition of just declaring someone a Christian without them actually acknowledging faith in Christ.This is one of the things about the Catholic Church that was ridiculed during the 15th,16th and 17th centuries that led to the Protestant Reformation.

Well a lot of the traditions that go with this holiday have a lot of ties to the Occult. "Dressing up and "trick or treating" are two of these traditions. This was done because it was believe that on this night "Demons" or "evil spirits" will come out and try to enter people's homes. So they dressed up like them so when they arrived they would see and believe that there were already "demons" or "evil spirits" in that home and they would leave. For some reason this was lost and "dressing up" became a kid thing and which is why the holiday is now geared more towards kids.

And the argument people use to defend the holiday is to say it allows kids to play "dress-up" but since when do kids did a reason to play dress up. Kids play dress up all the time. It's the one thing kids still do that isn't none violent or dangerous.

Well that is all I am going to say about Halloween. Remember this one thing about the holiday. It's also called "Reformation Day" because that is when that period began. Coming next Month: A report on Thanksgiving.

Bite Me v.7 Chapter 17 Part 1 of 3




The City Streets…

            Michelle is walking the city streets searching hi and low for vampires. Her plan was to slay everyone she finds unless they were her own. But as the night moved on, her desire to call her clan together grew intense. This starts when she spots a vampire ahead of her. She pulls out a stake and begins to move faster toward her target.

            Your time is through monster,” she thought to herself when the pain hit her chest, “Ah!”

            The vampire turns around and immediately recognizes Michelle.

            “My queen,” she says, “What is wrong?”

            As soon as the pain came, it went away leading Michelle to say, “I’m alright.”

            “Why do you have a stake in your hand my queen?” asked the vampire.

            “Well,” said Michelle, “I was going to slay you tonight but due to the fact that you are in my clan, doing so would hurt me a big deal. So please run before I change my mind.”

            “No, my queen,” said the vampire, “I can’t do that until I know for you sure you are alright and safe.”

            “You are very loyal,” said Michelle, “but the cause of my pain is the fact that I am 100% vampire queen and 100% vampire slayer. One side wants you dead and the other wants you to serve me. I thought I defeated the side that wants your service but it is getting stronger as the night progresses. I just don’t understand why yet.”

            The vampire looks up at the full moon.

            “Could that be why?” asked the vampire, “those things have different effects on all super natural creatures including vampires, especially those who can practice witchcraft.”

            “That’s got to be it,” said Michelle, “The moon is calling for my magic to be used tonight. Well I guess I can give up vampire slaying for now.”

            “Where are you going, my queen?” asked the vampire.

            “Home,” said Michelle, “Or at least my new home in the cave below my old home.”

            “May I join you, my queen?” asked the vampire.

            “Yes,” said Michelle, “please. I would like that a lot.”

            They head toward the cave below Michelle’s house.

Chapter 17


            “Mom,” said Wendy as they approached the water, “I know I was mad at you for making us vampires but I realize now you were trying to save my life and because her blood in me was permanent the only way I was ever going to return to Atlantis was to become a vampire. What I’m trying to say is I forgive you.”

            “Thank-you,” said Wanda, “that means so much to me. And I want you to know that I am very proud of you.”

            “Do you think we’ll be successful in convincing them that I should still have the throne?” asked Wendy.

            “There is only one way to find out,” said Wanda.

            “Let’s do this,” said Wendy who was one step away from initializing the transformation from human form to mermaid form.

            She dives off the deck into the water. Wanda follows her. Their bodies go through a transformation a vampire has never gone through.

            You know mom,” said Wendy, “As many times as I have journeyed between Earth and Atlantis, this process of becoming a mermaid in the water has never felt so amazing as it does now. It is as if I’m becoming one for the first time.”

            Wendy my dear,” said Wanda, “As someone who has died but somehow is still alive, this is your first time. And mine too.”

            That makes since,” said Wendy, “but it is still very amazing.”

            They swim deep into the water until they reach the limits most humans can swim to.

            Well,” said Wendy, “Once we cross this point home isn’t that far off.”

            No,” said Wanda, “It sure isn’t.”

            They pass the point and instantly they see the city of Atlantis. It is just sitting there under the water looking like it is ready for invaders to come in. But what those invaders don’t know is there is an invisible force field dome surrounding it that only mermaids can pass through. The two vampire-mermaids pass through which alters their forms once again.



            Michelle and the vampire who was following her enter the cave. The vampire is shocked to see so many people turned to stone.

            “My queen,” said the vampire, “who are these people and why were they turned to stone.”

            “These are potential vampires,” said Michelle, “and they were turned to stone for that reason.”

            “Who did this and why?” asked the vampire.

            “It was my mother or rather my grandmother,” said Michelle, “the fairy queen. She was hoping to stop me from embracing what I am but here I am, a fully embraced vampire queen.”

            “Can the spell be reversed?” asked the vampire.

            “I thinking and hoping it can,” said Michelle, “Fairy dust cast the spell but witchcraft should be able to reverse it. I’m not real sure if I’m strong enough to do it.”

            “Are you saying that you have witchcraft?” asked the vampire.

            “Yes,” said Michelle, “I am saying that.”

            “Is it not true that if the queen has witchcraft magic then so does the entire clan?” asked the vampire.

            “Yes,” said Michelle, “that is exactly right. Thank-you for reminding me of that.”

            “You are welcome my queen,” said the vampire.

            “What’s your name?” asked Michelle.

            “It’s Renee,” said the vampire.

            “How long have you been a vampire?” asked Michelle.

            “Not long,” said Renee, “about two months.”

            “How would you like to be my second in command?” asked Michelle.

            “Over the clan?” asked Renee.

            “Yes,” said Michelle, “When I’m away from here, you will be in charge.”

            “My queen,” said Renee, “It will be such an honor.”

            “Good,” said Michelle, “Now speaking of the clan, I think it is time I called them.”


            Upon entering the city, Wanda and Wendy are immediately met by guards.

            “Oh good,” said Wendy, “escorts to the palace and my throne.”

            “More like the dungeon for you two young lady,” said one of the guards.

            “Dungeon?” asked Wanda, “Why there?”

            “Because that is where all intruders to Atlantis are taken until the Queen decides what shall be done,” said the guard.

            “We know that,” said Wendy, “but wait the queen? How can there be a queen? Do you see a crown on my head?”

            “All I see is a vampire who somehow got her hands on an Atlantisian form and is here for the purpose of invading Atlantis,” said the guard.

            “Willard,” said Wanda, “is that the way to talk to the Princess.”

            “Mam,” said Willard, “If you are talking about Wendy, she died months ago therefore making Whitney the true heir apparent.”

            “But I’m right here,” said Wendy.

            “Yes, you are,” said Willard, “but you are still considered dead and have no claim to the throne and by orders of the late King Webster, the council immediately crowned Whitney Queen of Atlantis and it is her decision what your fate will be.”

            Chains are placed on Wendy and Wanda. They were then led away to the palace. When they entered they were immediately recognized by some of the staff.

            “Hey where are you guards taking the Queen and her daughter?” one of them asked.

            “We’re taking these intruders to the dungeon to await a decision from the queen,” said Willard.

            “But that is the Queen and her daughter the Princess,” said the staff member.

            “Correction,” said Willard, “These two are vampires who have invaded Atlantis.”

            “But they look just like Wanda and Wendy,” said the staff member.

            “Wanda and Wendy died months ago,” said Willard, “these two are nothing more than vampire invaders. If the queen is wise she will have them immediately executed the way vampires should be executed.”

            Mom,” thought Wendy, “Is this really the end of us?

            No,” said Wanda, “If just one person believes we are who we are by just looking at us and dismisses that we are vampires then there is a chance we will not only survive this but take the throne itself.”

            When they arrive in the dungeon, Wanda and Wendy are each thrown into a cell and told to keep quiet.


Saturday, October 26, 2013

Bite Me v.7 Season Finale Promo

Coming November the 18th...

The story comes to a close...almost.

After four months of posting chapters, the final installment  for this year is going up on Uncle Ed's Storyline. Chapter 20, a 10-part mega event. There will be 2 posts a day instead of one. One at 8 A.M. and one at 8 P.M. Get ready, because things will change forever. Be sure to ready this chapter beginning Monday, November 18th, 2013 and read the other chapters beforehand so you won't be too confused. After this week, there will be no more postings of this story until next year.

So I would read it if I was you.

Friday, October 25, 2013

Bite Me v.7 Chapter 16 Part 4 of 4




            Michelle is walking the city streets searching hi and low for vampires. Her plan was to slay everyone she finds unless they were her own. But as the night moved on, her desire to call her clan together grew intense. This starts when she spots a vampire ahead of her. She pulls out a stake and begins to move faster toward her target.

            Your time is through monster,” she thought to herself when the pain hit her chest, “Ah!”

            The vampire turns around and immediately recognizes Michelle.

            “My queen,” she says, “What is wrong?”

            As soon as the pain came, it went away leading Michelle to say, “I’m alright.”

            “Why do you have a stake in your hand my queen?” asked the vampire.

            “Well,” said Michelle, “I was going to slay you tonight but due to the fact that you are in my clan, doing so would hurt me a big deal. So please run before I change my mind.”

            “No, my queen,” said the vampire, “I can’t do that until I know for you sure you are alright and safe.”

            “You are very loyal,” said Michelle, “but the cause of my pain is the fact that I am 100% vampire queen and 100% vampire slayer. One side wants you dead and the other wants you to serve me. I thought I defeated the side that wants your service but it is getting stronger as the night progresses. I just don’t understand why yet.”

            The vampire looks up at the full moon.

            “Could that be why?” asked the vampire, “those things have different effects on all super natural creatures including vampires, especially those who can practice witchcraft.”

            “That’s got to be it,” said Michelle, “The moon is calling for my magic to be used tonight. Well I guess I can give up vampire slaying for now.”

            “Where are you going, my queen?” asked the vampire.

            “Home,” said Michelle, “Or at least my new home in the cave below my old home.”

            “May I join you, my queen?” asked the vampire.

            “Yes,” said Michelle, “please. I would like that a lot.”

            They head toward the cave below Michelle’s house.

Preview of Chapter 17:

The Ocean outside the City…

            “Mom,” said Wendy as they approached the water, “I know I was mad at you for making us vampires but I realize now you were trying to save my life and because her blood in me was permanent the only way I was ever going to return to Atlantis was to become a vampire. What I’m trying to say is I forgive you.”

            “Thank-you,” said Wanda, “that means so much to me. And I want you to know that I am very proud of you.”

            “Do you think we’ll be successful in convincing them that I should still have the throne?” asked Wendy.

            “There is only one way to find out,” said Wanda.

            “Let’s do this,” said Wendy who was one step away from initializing the transformation from human form to mermaid form.

            She dives off the deck into the water. Wanda follows her. Their bodies go through a transformation a vampire has never gone through.

            You know mom,” said Wendy, “As many times as I have journeyed between Earth and Atlantis, this process of becoming a mermaid in the water has never felt so amazing as it does now. It is as if I’m becoming one for the first time.”

            Wendy my dear,” said Wanda, “As someone who has died but somehow is still alive, this is your first time. And mine too.”

            That makes since,” said Wendy, “but it is still very amazing.”

            They swim deep into the water until they reach the limits most humans can swim to.

            Well,” said Wendy, “Once we cross this point home isn’t that far off.”

            No,” said Wanda, “It sure isn’t.”

            They pass the point and instantly they see the city of Atlantis. It is just sitting there under the water looking like it is ready for invaders to come in. But what those invaders don’t know is there is an invisible force field dome surrounding it that only mermaids can pass through. The two vampire-mermaids pass through which alters their forms once again.